Gate of Heavenly Peace
The light of the screen flickered across my face
My young impressionable eight year old mind
Gazing there upon that screen
I saw a man totally consigned.
The Unknown Rebel stood there still
Halting all their military might
Stopping them dead with only his will
Standing to fight the good fight.
Watching this symbol of protest
Standing solemnly in the square
There is no way I could have known
Of the girl who lived near there.
Eighteen years later I stood in that square
That hot July day under an azure sky
In a country that once seemed so far away
Now seen through another’s eyes.
We walked there happily hand in hand
Around a monument to heroes who had to fight
And she told me of her time near there
With shots heard ringing through the night.
Her long black hair flowed so freely
In a gentle summer’s kiss
How had we come to find each other
Enraptured in our euphoric bliss.
I still think of that tank man today
One lone man taking a stand
And how we all eventually come full circle
No matter how well our life is planned.


12 comments:
oh cool our sensei est tres romantique!
Is this another one of your cool poems!??...It is really good!!..as Abi says tres romantique!
Yes it is another one of my creations! Ah but did you understand what I was talking about? hehe :P:P
Glad you liked it.
Well I guess you are talking about seeing something involving violence I am guessing near where meimei lives...and only seeing it on t.v when you were 8...but you returned with her!? and she told you her remembrances of everything that happened...I dont know, just a guess
Tianamen square...the unknown man or hero that walked into the chaos...I read it in the paper yesterday..it hit me!...hope I am right!
Check this out: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tank_Man
This shows the image that I am talking about and what was going on there in 1989! :D
宝贝写得非常好~!
Wow!! I just saw the pic..BRAVE man!!..wow!..I guess I was right then! Yay!
I think you may have been right, but the poem is not really about that individual as such. It is more about how I came to be there 18 years later! ;)
I was RIGHT!!..That is what I said in an earlier comment!!
Oh yeah?...well.. KIAI! hehe All I can say is at this very moment all I can think about is the beach! Oh to live that life everyday!;)
I know The Beach..was absolutely gorgeous...Ahhh!!..o.k must not look to the past but the future(September), and stop thinking about Dungarvan..but it is very hard..It was such a good weekend, definitely the best Sensei Kato course I have been to..must not break down to tears! Me is very sad! :(
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